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Paul Kan - LIGHT EDIT with formatting averaged 4 pages/hour in l.5" left margin. Comparable to proofreading, minor corrections only.

Sheri McHenry - typical AVERAGE EDIT with formatting averaged 600 wds/hr. Time includes read school guides, style formatting and style editing, light edit verb tense, match headings to front matter.

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Sheri L. McHenry - Abstract

This thesis examines the pros and cons of non-transportation companies using extranet solutions today and determines the impacts of these solutions relative to the transportation industry. 

Exploratory research was conducted to determine if extranet solutions have any impact on the ability to provide better customer service.  Can extranet solutions; a) increase productivity by improving the information sharing process; b) lower the cost of doing business, and therefore, improve process efficiency; c) enhance a company’s global opportunities; and d) improve the supply-chain and demand management process?

Findings support the fact that an extranet solution could not only improve customer service, but also lower company costs.  Findings also suggest that through the use of extranet solutions, data integrity and timeliness of data would also improve. 

Pamela J. Young - Abstract

Healing traditions are dependent upon the sociocultural interpretation of illness and well being, in addition to resource allocation and accessibility. In the case of developing nations, limited resources and inaccessibility to biomedicine play a significant role when reviewing the efficacy and employment of traditional healing practices. The international biomedical community recognizes the AIDS pandemic in developing nations confirming that sub-Sahara Africa has the highest rates of incidence, prevalence, and mortality with millions of confirmed cases of HIV/AIDS. Case in point, the AIDS crisis in Botswana has not only overwhelmed the limited biomedical community in this region, but has also forced the creation of a dual health care system formally integrating indigenous healing practices with biomedicine. My proposed research will trace the history of Botswana from both the sociocultural and medical perspective; provide an epidemiological interpretation of the progression of the AIDS epidemic.  This research project will also illustrate the genesis and changing topology of health services that define the combined efforts of biomedicine and indigenous healing practices, including the functional relationship linking both biomedical and traditional healers.

Drew Stevens - Abstract

Many American businesses spend few resources and funds on structured employee training programs. As such, employees are unskilled in numerous company tasks and know little about the company they work for and the reason for its existence. The impetus of this study stems from previous work within a niche within a the larger field of Financial Services, Market Data. Most if not all of the firms do little to instruct the employees about their firm, their industry and their purpose of existence.

Training is imperative, and it serves two purposes, satisfaction on the job and efficiency and increased morale in job performance.

The issue that I am trying to address in this work is the importance of training. I want to determine if training when completed and even continued training, leads to job satisfaction and better productivity in the workplace.
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This thesis examines the pros and cons of non-transportation companies that are using extranets today, and determines the impact of the up-to-the-minute data they can provide to the transportation industry. Exploratory research was conducted to determine whether extranets have had any impact on the ability of other companies to improve their customer service. Questions asked were: Can extranet solutions: (a) Increase productivity by improving the information sharing process? (b) Lower the cost of doing business, and therefore, improve process efficiency? (c) Enhance a company’s global opportunities? (d) Improve the supply-chain-and-demand management process? Findings indicate that using extranets does improve customer service, lower company costs, and improve data integrity and timeliness.






Healing traditions depend upon sociocultural interpretations of illness and well-being as well as allocation of and accessibility to resources. In the case of developing nations, when reviewing the efficacy and employment of traditional healing practices, limited resources and inaccessibility to biomedicine play a significant role. The international biomedical community recognizes the AIDS pandemic in developing nations, and confirms that sub-Saharan Africa has the highest rates of incidence, prevalence, and mortality, including millions of confirmed cases of HIV/AIDS. Case in point, the AIDS crisis in Botswana not only has overwhelmed that limited biomedical community, but also has forced creating the dual health-care system—by formally integrating indigenous healing practices with biomedicine. My research will trace the history of Botswana from both the sociocultural and medical perspectives, and provide an epidemiological interpretation of the progression of the AIDS epidemic.  This research will also illustrate the genesis and changing topology of health services that define the combined efforts of biomedicine and indigenous healing practices, including the functional relationship that links both biomedical and traditional healers.



Many American businesses spend few resources or funds on structured employee-training programs. As such, most employees are unskilled at numerous company tasks and know little about the company for which they work or the reason it exists. The impetus of this study stems from previous work within a niche field in Market Data Financial Services. Research indicates that most firms have done little to instruct their employees about their firm, industry, and purpose of existence. Training employees serves two primary purposes: (a) satisfaction on the job, which results in (b) increased morale, job performance, efficiency, and job productivity. The goal of this research is to determine if, and to what degree, employee training does lead to job satisfaction and/or better productivity in the workplace.

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PAUL KAN   -  LIGHT EDIT

Humanitarian Intervention, War, and the State

In modern civil wars, the legitimacy of the state is further challenged by its inability (or unwillingness) to protect its own citizens: 90 percent of casualties are civilians and not soldiers. It is not surprising that civil wars like those in Rwanda, Bosnia, Sudan, and Kosovo are associated with humanitarian tragedies that have led to the massive outflow of refugees and displaced people internally. For instance, by 1993, 1 out of every 130 people on earth was forced to flee a war. Beyond the mass movement of people, civil wars have culminated in human atrocities, such as genocide, by the belligerents. The violent effects produced by civil wars have made them of greater concern to the international community. Civil wars are also notoriously the most difficult conflicts to resolve; only a quarter to a third of them have found their way to negotiation tables. 
        
The frequency, effects, and nature of civil wars have broadened the discussion of international security by including human rights considerations. Humanitarian intervention—or the multilateral use of outside military force authorized by an international organization to quell massive abuses of human rights—has been the most utilized response to emergency situations where a state is divided by civil war and where such division is causing immense human suffering. Humanitarian intervention also has been the most practiced deployment of force by industrialized nations in the post-Cold War era. The proliferation of this type of intervention, with its mandate to protect populations from harm, may be leading to further development of human-rights standards that supersede the sanctity of state sovereignty.
        
Changes in patterns of war and intervention do not occur, however, in a vacuum; they often are reflections of prevailing international economic conditions and international power arrangements organized by a dominant state, or hegemony. These changes, in turn, create effects in the global system and raise the question: What have been the effects of military and humanitarian interventions on the guiding norms of international behavior, such as human rights, and on existing institutions in the international arena, like the state? By answering this question in this dissertation, the implications of humanitarian intervention in relation to states and the development of international norms are addressed.
        
Often overlooked in the current debate over humanitarian intervention has been its relationship to socio-economic trends in the global society. Indeed, it is no coincidence that humanitarian intervention is taking place in a more economically-interdependent world than in previous eras of international history. Even modern leaders seem to acknowledge the growing relationship between globalization, security, and human rights. Explaining the emergence of an “international community” as the reason for NATO’s intervention in Kosovo, Tony Blair remarked to an American television audience:

We are all internationals now, whether we like it or not. . . .We cannot refuse to participate in global markets if we want to prosper. We cannot ignore new political ideas if we want to innovate. We cannot turn our backs on conflicts and the violation of human rights within other countries if we still want to be secure.


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